Saturday, November 8, 2008

Back again...

Laura, this one's for you! Without your last comment, I'd have continued with my self-imposed blog blackout for a little while longer. But what the heck..the end of my rewrite is nowhere in sight so my blogisphere exile really didn't do much good.
Well, not exactly true.

Greenwood Girls has developed into a different story. I worked hard rewriting the front end and with the help of my critique group, been ironing out the inconsistencies and questions about the elite gymnastic world. Have to say, it's great to have fresh eyes!

Now I'm working on the back end, building to the climax and working on a dramatic ending. My writing class friend, Marisa, pointed out a cinematic ending to me that was brilliant. Her interpretation of the summary of my plot points sparked a clear picture of how the book should end. It's perplexing to me how she did this. How can someone, who hasn't spent a thousand hours mulling over your book, be able to see so clearly the ending? I think this is the gift editors posses.

For the record, this was the single biggest highlight of my Fall, besides of course, drinking a $300 bottle of Dom Perignon on my wedding anniversary...but that's another story.

So for the last few days, in between parenting and work, I've been trying to capture Marisa's clear vision and blend it with my own. I think this has given me the legs needed to push on with the rewrite and perhaps, carve out some time for a little joy....


  1. WOOHOOO!!! Yeah:):) *turns carwheels* You're back, you're back!!!

    I'm so intrigued by the new ending to GG and am DYING to know what it is. Props to Marisa for being the gal behind the gal on this one.

    $300 bottle of Dom, aye?? Nice work!

    Thanks for the post *hugs*

  2. So glad you're back to the blogging world, Patty! The Greenwood Girls is really good. I can't wait to read what happens next!

  3. Thanks Laura and Vivian,
    It's great being back. I missed posting and reading and browsing. Must remember to keep working!

  4. You OK with the fires in SB? I know they are burning in Montecito, but wondered if you are getting a lot of smoke and ash?? *hugs*


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